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Hi Josh,

This is an interesting and descriptive entry about the Romantic period. I also like the picture you’ve included, as it enhances your entry. I believe that it is vital to study the context of any text that one reads, as it can allow the reader to understand the author’s intent of the novel or poem. In order to improve this entry I would change the last line of your entry to: “how our lives would be if romanticism didn’t exist”. I would also join the paragraph where it says “various” to the previous paragraph. Overall, you’ve done a good job in providing important information about the Romantic period, so keep up the good work!

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