Peer Review 4 https://annabellebarnslicha.wordpress.com/2016/08/27/w5-unwavering-connection/comment-page-1/#comment-43

Hi Annabelle,

This is a wonderful entry! You’ve thoroughly explained your personal experiences and effectively connected it to Kat and Paul’s relationship. Also, your personal expression and utilisation of descriptive language engaged me as a reader, in particular, your description of the nature of the ocean in the last paragraph of your entry and its connection to how people bond is very interesting. Keep up the great work!

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