Peer Review 3 https://courtzerafa.wordpress.com/2016/08/28/106/comment-page-1/#comment-4

This is quite a unique and interesting entry Courtney! I love how you’ve incorporated your own ideas and understanding of Baumer’s overall message in the book, especially near the end of your entry when you state: “Life. Breath. Acknowledgment of that”. In order to improve this entry I would be a bit more careful with the sentence structure of this conversation and not refer to his name constantly. Also, I’m not quite sure I understand the purpose of your first line, so some of your ideas need further clarification. Although I must say that writing a conversation is much harder than writing a letter, so keep up the great work! 🙂

 

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