Peer Review 2 https://tkottaridis.wordpress.com/2016/08/20/wk-3-springtime-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-62

Great poem Tabitha! I love your use of alliteration and descriptive language, as it builds visual imagery, which makes it much more enjoyable for the reader. However, I would’ve liked to see you expand your ideas a bit more and therefore extend the length of the poem. Overall, keep up the good work!

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