Peer Review 7 https://charleshowellsite.wordpress.com/2016/04/17/art-gallery-of-nsw-discussion/comment-page-1/#comment-7

Hi, Charles,

Your entry is very well written in terms of detail and eloquence but it’s quite short. I love the painting that you included and how you clearly explained the meaning behind it by identifying the symbolism in the painting. Your interpretation of the painting is very insightful and interesting. In order to extend this entry and establish more depth in it, I would write about at least one other painting so that you provide a longer analysis of various kinds of artworks. Also, whenever you talk about how an artwork or text gives insight, always state that it gives insight to the reader, viewer, or in this case, to you personally. Overall, keep up the good work!

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