Peer Review 6

https://prarthanakarmacharya.wordpress.com/2016/04/30/conventional/comment-page-1/#comment-4

Hey, Prathana,

Just want to start off by saying that this is a great entry. You’ve shown a good understanding of the poem, The Measure. I agree with you on the point you made about ANZAC day. I also like the picture you’ve included, as it enhances your entry. In order to improve this entry, I would expand a bit more on the previous points you were trying to make, and just remember to put capital letters when needed, for instance when you started a new sentence saying “there” in the first paragraph.

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