Peer Review 5

Fantastic entry Barbara! Your introduction on the film, Suffragette, is very insightful. I also love how you’ve incorporated your own personal views on the matter of recognising the importance of feminism; this makes your entry really expressive and descriptive, which is great. I would just replace the word “his” to “her” as you are referring to Mary Gilmore in your last paragraph, so remember to proofread your work as much as you can.